Monday, September 13, 2010

Poem- Dislocation

My suburb with
the egg shell
painted sky.

And cartoon children
with huge eyes.
Speaking Te Reo*.

While shadow cats slide
slickly over walls.
Then walk flinching on the lawns.

As low flying aeroplanes
buzz tree-tops
scared of too solid clouds.

Someone has kicked
the chocks from the wheels
and the world lurches drunkenly.

*Te Reo is the Maori language.

10 comments:

Unknown said...

Yep, very tasty, I like them slickly cats.

Mendacious D said...

Very nice.

Big Bad Bald Bastard said...

While shadow cats slide
slickly over walls.
Then walk flinching on the lawns.


This is one of the best descriptions of a cat that I have ever read- it really captures the contrasts and contradictions that make up a feline beastie. Chuck Jones, in his autobiography, described a cat as "sitting fat and walking skinny". Uncanny creatures, those darn cats.

Vonnie said...

fun poem. I like the last few lines the best. I like the word chocks.

Vonnie said...

and my last comment made me sound like RainMan. I apologize. That wasn't my intention.

Jennifer said...

As low flying aeroplanes
buzz tree-tops
scared of too solid clouds.


:)

77south said...

At first glance I thought the children were speaking 'to Reo' which I took to mean REO Speedwagon. Which makes sense to me, children and the mentally infirm would be the only ones who would talk 'to REO Speedwagon'

bersoces. I don't know what it means but I like the sound of it.

Unknown said...

I find alot of wisdom in pop when the number plates (license plates) aren't talking to me.

undemic, singer on the floor.

Hamish Mack said...

is this working?

Unknown said...

Yep