Sunday, November 21, 2010

Poem- A Break

We walk down to the estuary.
Raising clouds of insects
like smoke, with our feet.

We look for clues
in the sky or on the water
as to what has happened to us.

Not just who said what, when
but the death of that bright us,
that used to shine so hard.

Where now we 
are signal towers in the night
with no codebooks.

And the fog
around us is made of
deadening sadness.

As we wonder at
those other two.
compared to the careful, bored, lonely people

We are now.
With only
a desire to be done, in common,


Note: This a work of fiction

6 comments:

Unknown said...

There is no fiction ;-)

thshi, he was

ckc (not kc) said...

...man, it may be fiction, but that doesn't mean it isn't true

ifthethunderdontgetya™³²®© said...

We all need a break, now and then.

Getting broken is another thing.
~

Smut Clyde said...

AK has his own special notation for counting the syllables in haiku.

mikey said...

Tim O'Brien, the patron saint of those who came home both more and less than when they left, informs us thusly:

"And just because none of it ever happened doesn't mean it's not true"

If there was something like a god, I would tonight invoke his blessing on all of us...

Unknown said...

...everything is true for I have heard from Hell...however we are told from Blake,
A truth that's told with bad intent beats all the lies you can invent. William Blake ...