Sunday, November 7, 2010

Poem- The Safety net

A safety net would be a good thing,
for when we walk the highly wired life.
Woven by friends, families, neighbours,
artist, writers and maybe even poets.
It is odd that a quality we aspire to,
down-to-earthness,
is so feared.
The earth is not forgiving when
we slip up, up there.
Yet it is the slip down that does
the damage.
A cricketer  told me
Modern players are too
careless against
head high bowling,
because they have helmets.
And I wonder if a safety net
might make us careless about
failure.
But cricket balls are not
like the knives of self-contempt
we lacerate
ourselves with.
A safety net will not blunt those,
It might just slow you as you fall.

14 comments:

ckc (not kc) said...

I like it.

(even though you didn't work phlegm in)

Unknown said...

Love this, you got your own style going there.

Hamish Mack said...

Sorry about the lack of phlegm, would "spit" be OK at some stage?
Thanks Merc, it is me.

ckc (not kc) said...

spit is easy - cricket is hard - ya done good.

mikey said...

There really isn't a safety net in life.

One stupid error in judgement.

One stranger gripped by rage and victimization.

One idiot in control of 2400 pounds of internal combustion powered kinetic lethality.

One unlikely confluence of gravity and a mishandled safe.

It's something to make us feel invulnerable. To examine one's actual vulnerability is to stay in a back corner in a fetal position with a pistol...

Smut Clyde said...

spit is easy - cricket is hard

Perhaps the Black Caps should switch to a different sport.

Smut Clyde said...

To examine one's actual vulnerability is to stay in a back corner in a fetal position with a pistol...

Also the best back corners have already been taken.

Big Bad Bald Bastard said...

This could be interpreted as a critique of Reagan/Thatcherism (I almost posted the perfect typo-ragin' Thatcherism).

Well done, old chum!

Jennifer said...

Love it.

Kathleen said...

excellent!

ifthethunderdontgetya™³²®© said...

Please allow me to add my voice to the calliope of acclaim!
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Substance McGravitas said...

And I wonder if a safety net
might make us careless about
failure.


Sure would be terrible to be able to be careless once in a while.

Smut Clyde said...

Please allow me to add my interpretative dance to the terpsichore of acclaim!

tigris said...

Thank you for sharing this.